The reduction of the stress and tension in the modern hectic life is a controversial question in this era. Some people believes that if they stay alone before sensitive moments and circumstances when they are really stressful, they will manage their feelings better. Personally, I disagree with this opinion because of the reasons I will explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, when someone is in solitude, the desperate thoughts of bad happenings will come to his or her mind more than the time is spent with others. In public by talking, communicating and making jokes with friends and family, we can be distracted from the stressful thoughts and the pressure of the concerns will be reduced and it can change our attitudes and make us more cheerful. I can remember the time that I had difficult exams, the night before the test when I ate dinner with my family in a warm environment with my sisters and parents, I forgot all of the tension and stress of the exam and I could sleep very well.
Moreover, it is always sensed that we have the supports of our acquaintances in family gatherings and hanging with friends. The feeling of love, of someone always be ready to help us can be great to feel more vigorous and energetic. As a matter of fact, the feeling of safety can be more tangible when we spend our time with our friends and family. This feeling of safety can relax us and brings tranquility to our hectic lives. For instance, when a person becomes ill, and he or she have some surgeries, doctors suggest that don't leave them alone and always want someone to be aside them to diminish their stress. Thus they can cope with the harsh condition more relax.
Although sometimes for being away from our pressed time and get some amenity is better to go somewhere in the nature alone without internet and cellphones and rest for a few days, hanging with friends and family can reduce our stress and make us more cheerful in daily life instead of loneliness.
To sum up, in my point of view the love and attention of our beloved people can not only make us healthier spiritually because they can distracted us from our difficulties but may also breed the seed of hope in our heart to continue more hopefully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 560, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...t with my sisters and parents, I forgot all of the tension and stress of the exam and I co...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...riends. The feeling of love, of someone always be ready to help us can be great to feel m...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... The feeling of love, of someone always be ready to help us can be great to feel m...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...hen a person becomes ill, and he or she have some surgeries, doctors suggest that do...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve some surgeries, doctors suggest that dont leave them alone and always want someon...
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Line 3, column 615, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...be aside them to diminish their stress. Thus they can cope with the harsh condition ...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'distract'
Suggestion: distract
... healthier spiritually because they can distracted us from our difficulties but may also b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, thus, well, for instance, as a matter of fact, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63888888889 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52056509399 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8428629869 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.214285714 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114446751779 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442273558248 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285209015293 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663183423134 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350581257619 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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