the college years are the best time in person's life.
Lifetime has lots of stages which are full of experiences, memories, prosperities and fails. College life and living as a student is one of these stages that is reminded as a best time in life by some people. On the other hand, some people believe that it can be really difficult because it's the first time you should decide and manage your life issues, financial problems and expenses on your own. In my opinion, it is the best season of my life because of the reasons I will mention below.
First of all, after high school most of the students feel that they are entering adulthood. In this stage students enjoy the feelings of autonomous and independence of the adulthood age. For example, they just take their driving license in my country, Iran. So they can drive to suburbs or stay out late and come back home whenever they want by their cars. As a matter of fact, they feel freedom without any commitment and responsibility.
Second of all, most of the teenagers don't have any deep financial concerns due to their parents' supports. It is a conspicuous point in college life that most of us have no worry about money, maybe some students have part time jobs or internships for their future careers but they don’t really have to manage their expenses on their own. For instance, when I was a college student I have a monthly allowance which I could spend it for transportation, hanging out with friends, books and etc. but I did not worry about the money for food, house groceries, rent, tax, bank installments and these things.
Third of all, some people believe that their best friends are their college friends. The time you spend in campus is more than the time of high school classes. Moreover, there are more curricular activities in college than at school that’s why we spend more time in campus and it cause to find more people who help us, are our soulmates and who we can trust as our best friends. Furthermore, the traits and personalities of teenagers are shaped completely after high school and it can be a factor of finding the real friend of your lifetime.
To sum up, I agree with the ones who think college is the best time in a lifetime due to the feeling of first independency feelings, free mind of financial issues and finding the friends for life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
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Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, third, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65763546798 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53148894209 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6438719131 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.055555556 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225136427987 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699672203332 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862597766733 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135235126571 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864958802434 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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