Choosing the living place depends on everyone's priorities and life circumstances, some people find their amenity in living their lifelong in a town or city where they were born some other prefer not. Personally speaking, I would rather to live in my birthplace. I will make my notion conspicuous in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, living in the place that you grew up can provide more relationships and connections. In fact you have found friends since you started your school for about 13 years. After the university by working, the people you know will increase since you may have colleagues, managers, etc. Besides in our hometown, most of our relatives and acquaintances are living. Thus, you never feel alone and you always have a bunch of people to help you when you need them. For instance, if one they you feel sick badly, there is one who can help you to go to the hospital, or when you are looking for a job opportunity, there will be lots of friends and family members who can take your hand.
Next, in this era all of us experience a hectic life with everyday challenges, while migration can add some other obstacles to our lives. The culture, laws and facilities of each city or town will be distinct with others. Therefore familiarity with all of these matters will be challenging. As a result by wasting our precious life time to habituate to new places, we can use it to progress our skills, knowledge and earn more money.
Last but not least, one of the reasons that people tend to change their place is to be exposed to different cultures, languages. I think that purpose will be achieved by travelling through different cities and countries without burden immigration risks.
In conclusion, deciding to live from birth to death in one town or travelling between places to live is a personal choice. In my point of view living in the hometown instead of migrating will bring more opportunities, connections and tranquility to my life.
- would you prefer to take course taught by professors with whom you have already had other classes during your past years of study or would you prefer to take courses with professors whose classes you have never taken before why 60
- the college years are the best time in person's life. 73
- It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' job. 83
- would you prefer to take course taught by professors with whom you have already had other classes during your past years of study or would you prefer to take courses with professors whose classes you have never taken before why 60
- If the people have the opportunity to have a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73866964395 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3739672853 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28339105131 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837927566999 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054720703505 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141232783716 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401801167261 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.