You arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Examine the important event
Apologize for the situation
Suggest a new arrangement
Dear Akash,
I trust you are well and doing good. I'm writing this letter to inform you about postpond of my Britain visit.
As you know, I have already confirmed the tocket last month itself for upcoming Christmas holidays but unfortunalty school exam of my daughter has been prepond and now it is clashing with my london itinerary. Moreover, my wife is still struggling to recover from post covid related issues. Therefore, it is utmost important for me to stay here to take care of daughter's education and wife's well being. I deeply regret for the cancellation at last moment. I was really excited to meet you & infact I had sort listed many tourist places like London bridge, famour telephone booth, big caves, palace & at the end city tour but i am so much disappointed. Reading this letter will spoil your mood too but there is no other option other than revising visit dates. Please accept my apology for same.
However, I have worked upon the revise travelling dates in February after finish up to exam & subsequent my business tour. I hope revise scheule would be accepted at your end.
In anticipation for your prompt & positive response.
With lots of love,
Mitul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...big caves, palace & at the end city tour but i am so much disappointed. Reading t...
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...ves, palace & at the end city tour but i am so much disappointed. Reading this l...
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...isit dates. Please accept my apology for same. However, I have worked upon th...
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...ositive response. With lots of love, Mitul
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87623762376 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49388449864 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.742574257426 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6079897201 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7692307692 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199873031368 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650035396669 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473280217713 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123001230116 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472669225819 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.