In the recent times, a large number of population are living the sendentary lifestyle. Today, people having a gym facilities but the sendentary lifestyle is become a popular among the people in the whole world. This essay will explain the problem as well as appropriate solution of this social issue.
To begin with, sedentary living bring the a lot of problems and the people who live this kind of life they will face this health issues in future. One of the major problem is that, major health disease such as heart issues, back pain, obesity will be came with the sedentary lifestyle. Nowadays, numerous people are facing this serious issues because they lived the sedentary life. Take a reasearch report of world health education (WHO)as an example, The WHO research report claim that, 75% dangerous diseases are genrate by giving the preference of sedentary lifestyle in the whole world. Researchers also explain that, over the few years the numbers of health problems are increasing rapidly because today people do not give the preference to live active and hardworking life, they live lazy or sedentary life which increases the number of diseases. Another problem is that, if people live this lifestyle after a few time they will habitual with sedentary life and in future, they can not easily change their lifestyle. Those people can not do any hardworking jobs alongside they can not give their construction on their work.
Moreover, Although sedentary life have a lot of problems, solutions are also available. Firstly, those people who live this life they do not have awareness about disadvantages of this kind of lifestyle. So, the government should giving the awareness and guides programs, which helps them to change their lifestyle. Secondly, those people who are habitual with lazy life. they can do some exercise like they can go to gym, do yoga. which are fruitful for changing lifestyle as well as they live a healthy life.
To conclude, no one can deny, sendantay life having a lot of disadvantage, people will faced numerous problems but it they get awareness and do excersices on daily basis as a result they will live fit and active life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: the; a
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: few times
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99723756906 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5317751143 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466850828729 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0393460392 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.411764706 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187008803953 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769097005252 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389905347685 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129541334666 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668105798576 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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