some people believe that tourists do not learn anything during their holidays, while others believe they learn a lot. discuss both views and opinion
Peoples go on holiday can learn little things about the place. Some peoples agree that tourist learn very much about the place by visiting on holidays but some peoples do not agree with this.
Going on holiday is sometimes good because you learn about local peoples. How they are dress wearing and eating local food. For example, go to city near sea people eat fish and crab. So when we go to sea city we can eat different type of food which local people eat. This is good learning about the city.
Sometimes when on holiday we go and we see the places and not try local food because we get our food in hotel. In this type of case we cannot understand about the local food. This case they go on holiday but not learn anything at all.
In conclusion, I think some people like to try and learn about other city on holiday and some do not try at all. In my view, I think it is good to try and learn to eat and learn on holidays for children and whole family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...city near sea people eat fish and crab. So when we go to sea city we can eat different ...
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Line 4, column 44, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...conclusion, I think some people like to try and learn about other city on holiday and s...
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Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... all. In my view, I think it is good to try and learn to eat and learn on holidays for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19459459459 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.93371531788 2.80592935109 69% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 176.041082164 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475675675676 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8880450293 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.6666666667 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4166666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244291074698 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11452555943 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873131330726 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178392379685 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860829891925 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 13.0946893788 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 50.2224549098 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.83 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 78.4519038076 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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