TPO.17
The article states that because of human population growth, we can see some bird's habitat have been destroying and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor in the lecture casts serious doubt on the passage by using a number of points that are contrary to each of the author's reasons.
First of all, the reading claims that natural habitats of birds are destroying by human settlements continue. In contrast, the professor refutes this point by saying that it is not convincing because it does not affect all birds in the same way. He mentions that there are a lot of complains by people in urban areas towards birds population like pigeon. As a result, some of birds may shrink but others are not.
On another hand, the article posits that agriculture is on the road of expanding and it will result more habitat converting. However, the teacher describes that it will not happen soon. According to the teacher as technology advances in the US, less land has needed agriculture. He says that it is about using new crops that need to destroy habitats.
Finally, the reading makes it clear that there is a health problem related to use more chemical pesticides in order to kill garden pests. On the other hand, the lecturer opposes this point by explaining people are healthier now. We also learn that first, new and much less toxic has developed and second, there are more resistance pesticides. As a result, we should not be worry.
- TPO.12 60
- Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
- 32. Which one is better: enjoy money when you earn it or save it for some time in the future? 70
- Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 80
because of human population growth,
because of human population's growth,
because of the growth of human population,
we can see some bird's habitat have been destroying and provides three reasons of support.
we can see that some bird's habitats have been destroying, and it provides three reasons of support.
the reading claims that natural habitats of birds are destroying by human settlements continue.
the reading claims that the natural habitats of birds are destroying by human continuous settlements .
less land has needed agriculture.
less land has needed by agriculture.
less land has needed for agriculture.
we should not be worry.
we should not worry.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 250 250
No. of Characters: 1170 1200
No. of Different Words: 143 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.976 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.68 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.412 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 33 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.655 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4