Is it better to do a job you hate for a high salary or a job you love for a low salary?
when it involves career choice, there is still a debatable argument, whether to settle on the job you hate with a high salary or the one you love but with a lower level source of income. I solidly believe that a job you are keen on will be a perfect decision.
Initially, a job is a career you shall follow for the remainder of your life. first, if you decide on a high-paid job, you can easily change it when you lose your motivation. Finding it boring and repetitive, you do not have the desire to complete your duties, which are done only by responsibility, not dedication. As a result, you will not put all of your efforts into each work and your career promotion is restricted. second, not all jobs are suitable for your characteristics. some high-salary jobs require being extroverted such as hotel management, human resource management, etc, while others require concentration such as it, research, banking, etc. People who are passionate about communicating and do not want to conduct much research and analysis will not consider the second group as an ideal occupation. Finally, there is a practical situation: a high-salary job means parallelly with pressure from directors, colleagues, and the amount of your work. therefore, choosing a job you love; suitable for both your abilities and personalities are extremely important.
Additionally, following a dream job means following a long-term plan. Initially, having a target, an individual will know what he should do to achieve his goal, understand his ability, and thoroughly arrange his longstanding path. For instance, while other peers only study to graduate, the boy learns intending to be a worker of a well-known corporation with the amount of salary he wants to get. moreover, if a person does not have a detailed plan, he will do as be told and have no target to pursue. Nowadays, numerous high school students’ career choices were made due to the salary or high chance of being employed, but purely a few of them thoroughly research. it ends up in a scenario that some occupations have abundant seekers, while others are short of workers. Besides, many of them do not even know what their aspirations are and what job fits them well. that is the explanation of why many pupils after graduation are not aware of their job orientation.
However, money plays such an essential role in daily life that the salary you get should not be under living standards. it would better be adequate for you to obtain necessities such as a house, clothes, etc. moreover, you shall also look after your future, such as marriage, your children’s school fees and their needs. it is essential to own a tolerable life at the primary stage of marriage, and a good school for your children, which is costly. Lastly, you must be responsible for your parents, such as hospitals, medicine, etc. therefore, a job you love should first be a job that helps you have enough life, both mental health and property.
In conclusion, previous ideas are that a job should be an enormous dream for the rest of your life. A fitting occupation is the one you willingly define as “live to work, not work to live.” However, your choice must not keep one’s eyes off from practical life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2690.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 552.0 315.596192385 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8731884058 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81601465964 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514492753623 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 837.9 506.74238477 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3712041787 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6296296296 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437476279333 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126420486214 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867741902938 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259239347273 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104007934473 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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