Water is a natural resource that should always be free . Goverments should ban the sale of bottled water . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is true that water is an integral part of our life . This raises a concern for governments about how to provide people with freshwater . Some people believe that water should be freely sold, and the governments ought to prohibit the selling of bottled water . This practice will be discussed .
On the one hand ,there are several reasons why I believe that the sale of bottled water should not be banned . First and foremost, the problem of health is the most worrying , which is affected by using tap water . In many countries , the tap water source is being polluted , which contains a lot of contaminated substances namely oil , mercury , and acid . It is polluted water which does harm to the people’s health and causes serious diseases especially cancer . For example , in Vietnam many enterprises release toxic emissions directly to the atmosphere , which lead to acid or merciless rain . Waterworks take advantage of rain-water to supply water to the users . As a result , many people suffer from cancer . Besides , a group of people think that bottled water has been tested for quality . Therefore, instead of using contaminated water , they tend to utilize bottled water that is fresh and good for their health .
On the other hand , consuming bottled water also has some detrimental effects . Firstly , not only is plastic box not biodegradable, but it is also not recycled leading to the problem of adding waste to environment . Furthermore , it destroys nature and causes many species of animal loss accomodation and become extinct . Thus , people should cut down the usage of bottled water to protect the environment . In addition , people should use more fresh water provided by waterworks and they have to pay for the utilization of water to ensure that tap water is as hygienic as bottled water . If people consume a large amount of bottled water and do not recycle , the governments should ban the sale of it .
In conclusion , it seems to me that bottled water could be benefit in different ways , but people should control the usage of it . Beside that , governments should enhance the quality of tap water to make sure that all people use tap water sources without any concern .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97527472527 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65411525032 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508241758242 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0024294589 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2380952381 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47619047619 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.01903807615 837% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355350823712 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126408556355 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101340489422 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251774279667 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487324964325 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.