In some cultures, the old age is valued, while in other cultures the youth is more valued. Discuss both options and give your own opinion.
The importance of yonger people and older people which was always debatable has now become more controversial. Keeping this debate in view, both viewpoints will be analyzed meticulously. before a reasonable verdict is established.
The first and foremost reason for champion the former viewpoint, Every old people provides superior knowledge about customs and traditions to every individuals. Their blessings are extremely beneficial which help people to live longer in their entire life. for instance, for any type of rituals, Older people are always prioritise for the betterment of one's life. Despite this, it should not be forgotten that, these are our grandparents, who provide us morals and values for respect everyone and therefore it is not less than a boon.
Considering the latter view point, this fact is undeniable that, today's youth are diligent and brilliant. They do their Best for a better and superior life of their progeny. Young person can work longer and also they consider themselves as an earning source. Compared to old person, youngsters are more enthusiastic and can take any sort of risk lightly. Youngsters can be the future of their respective countries and can boost the economy of a nation. last but not least, teenagers are more active and willing to take any sort of risk compared to the old ones.
Having examined both viewpoints thoroughly, it can be established that both age group have their own value. I am of the view that old person should be prioritised more as they have more experienced regarding life. Therefore i am more inclined to favour the former viewpoint.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14068441065 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76357594304 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4135719077 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104941417043 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341070410829 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340053955263 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653881351035 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039196543107 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.