The chart shows the gender distribution of Australians who did regular physical activity across six different age groups in 2010.
In general, the graph demonstrates that while female Australians exercised more frequently than males in most age categories with a substantial gender gap, there was no significant difference in the distribution of those aged 65 and higher.
Regarding the male group, men aged 15 to 24 years old were the only age group in which men exceeded women, with a percentage of 52.8. However, Australian males between 25 to 44 years old were less engaged in physical exercise, with just 39.5 percent of men aged 35 to 44 interested in physical activity. The number of males exercising regularly increased with age, reaching 46.7 percent in the group 65 and over.
Looking specifically at the female group, the percentage of those doing regular physical activity increased gradually over the first four age groups, rising from 47.7 percent to 53.3 percent in the 45 to 54 age group. Australian women in two older groups were less physically active, with the number dropping to 47.1 percent in the group 65 and older.
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- The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 77
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 95
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of those aged 65 and higher. Regarding the male group, men aged 15 to 24 years ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, regarding, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05291005291 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73520922464 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57671957672 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5992209589 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.166666667 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420520346659 0.215688989381 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230802099228 0.103423049105 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161012768233 0.0843802449381 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2905224924 0.15604864568 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174286831797 0.0819641961636 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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