Thesedays, more and more people are prone to have birth-giving plans when they get a bit old, about 30-40. This phenomenon is utterly different compared to people in the past who want to have children at an early age (18-25). The reason behind this tendency is about biological as well as financial benefits, which, I suppose, have greater advantages than drawbacks.
The most feasible explanation for the decision of having children in later years of life is that these decision-makers take their children benefits and their financial ability into serious account. Accordingly, loads of researches have illustrated that children who were given birth when their mothers are fully mature biologically have much stronger immune systems and resistance compared to others. Moreover, mature moms who have particular knowledge and experiences could easily educate their children precisely. In terms of financial issues, parents deciding to have children later in their life, usually because they want to prepare their children financially. Therefore, these children are provided with good education and material life.
Associating with these reasons, the downsides of this inclination could be eclipsed by its advantages. Children born and raised in these families might receive both physical and mental care from their guardians. In addition to having a good resistance, these children also have great intellect due to biological distinction as well as parental love and instruction. Later in their life, these well-educated and full of kindness children will be valuable residents of their countries.
In conclusion, people consider having kids after a particular age to guarantee good health conditions along with financial benefits for their children. I believe this is an appropriate decision because of these explanations given above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62589928058 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87859698183 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3444406663 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306586405039 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109353686585 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704560133937 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172269427086 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654845431376 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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