Some people believe that going to university or college after high school is a must for
young people to be better prepared for the world today. Others disagree, saying that
young people should spend their time learning from real life experiences after they finish
high school. Discuss both views and express your opinion.
At the age of technological development, young people can easily get access to information about economics, society, and politics; hence, there are two main tendencies students often wonder to choose from after graduating. While it is believed that studying at university or college is the only route to a successful career by some people, it is argued that it is better to develop their career through practical experience by others. This essay discusses both these views in greater detail and justifies my preference for higher education.
To begin with, learning from real-life experience after school has its pros because of financial and career. To be specific, in this way, young people become independent and can afford their own cost of living, which supports and decrease financial burdens on their parent. Therefore, they can prove their maturity. In terms of career, a person who chooses to learn practical experience instead of studying higher is likely to progress rapidly. They can gain social knowledge and improve their skills, which may bring about some chances to be promoted to higher positions such as managers.
Despite these merits of real-life experience, I am in favor of studying at a university or college for its remarkable benefits. First, plenty of employers are required academic qualifications when applying for a job in many professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor or a teacher without being informed about that major and having the relevant degrees. As a result, the graduate can earn higher salaries on average at $ 500, which is the most typical Reason, for I always find income, compared to work for experiential education at $200, the most important asset. Besides, a graduated degree plays a more vital role in a competitive labor market nowadays. With the foundation of a university qualification, people can easily have a Master's degree and even Doctor's degree, which is a massive advantage in job promotions. By contrast, it is impossible for those who do not have any qualifications from the college to compete when there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company.
In conclusion, education from university or real-life experience has its pros and cons. However, from my perspective, the benefits of studying at university or college outweigh those of studying from practical experience. Therefore, I find it wiser for students to choose higher education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$500'.
Suggestion: $500
... can earn higher salaries on average at $ 500, which is the most typical Reason, for ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'play'?
Suggestion: play
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2044.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22762148338 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94181656006 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552429667519 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2090355754 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300927734208 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862623810651 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469260161238 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181365129586 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292832140699 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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