The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
The greatness of any individual is generally measured in terms of the number of contributions that he/she has made to the world and how capable are these contributions to stand the test of time. it can however be argued that, the greatness can also simply lie in how well a person was able to handle a situation, or bring about a change or create an awareness. but its only after the demise of an individual that his greatness is truly spoken of or regarded. Although there can be exceptions of individuals whose greatness was shared and enjoyed by their contemporaries too, i would like to elucidate my views by sticking to how the greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, and often not by their contemporaries.
Firstly, a mere glance into history bombards us with lots of examples of greatest of scientists whose discoveries were merely disposed of or not approved by their contemporaries and fellow mates simply because they couldn't really understand the discovery, or may be because it stood against the beliefs of most of the then famous scholars, or sometimes even because the other scientists worried that they might be proven wrong and that the other one could get the fame. A lot of inventions and discoveries which date back to several centuries are still known to be relevant and accurate. For instance, a common misconception or belief that the earth was flat or that the sun revolved around moon was known to be prevalant for quite some time until Galileo proved that it was wrong. And for this brilliant discovery of his, he did face criticism from his contemporaries but is now being celebrated . there are many more similar examples that include the theory of relativity,quantum theory and like-alikes.
More diverse examples could be the lives of many great saints and sages, who are known to have lived an examplary life and yet criticized by the people of their times. lives of swami Vivekanada, swami Yogananda, and other great saints stand testimony to this. even in the present world, the good deeds and merits of an individual are regarded only after the person leaves his body. there seems to be a sudden pour out of love and respect for deceased who had been tortured,bullied and criticized throughout his life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, so, still, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85347043702 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84714697388 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555269922879 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.671412815 60.3974514979 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.230769231 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9230769231 23.4991977007 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428538780653 0.243740707755 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133754904942 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159481818625 0.0758088955206 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28592563659 0.150359130593 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176607489661 0.0667264976115 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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