With the passage of time, obesity among masses is increase in few Nations. Owing to which they become unhealthy and less fit. This essay will evaluate both reasons and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, many factors are responsible for the overweighting . Firstly,main reason is busy schedule and unhealthy diet plans. In this modern era, every person doing a job due to they unable to make food at home. Either, individuals eat junk food or not do any physical efforts. As a consequence,they become lazy and inactive. Next, all facilities are available and more work are done by the machines. In addition to, individuals prefer to spend their leisure time in front of television or in playing video games on electronic gadgets instead of outdoor games which also cause weight gaining in humans.
However, with many solutions this problem can be cured. Every citizen should learn time management skills with the help of which they can spend some time in doing exercise as well as to playing outdoor games. What's more,they should adopt balanced diet by avoiding junk food . If they eat healthy food, they may reduce their weight. Further more,they should do some work without the help of robots.
To conclude, although overweighting is one of the major problem which is faced by many nations but this can be reduced by taking some adequate steps. People should manage their time and eat nutrious food
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01271186441 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56862936014 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622881355932 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7061727361 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5882352941 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128785373709 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389558198478 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029038544711 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798733658481 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312014902982 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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