Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
It is true that society is created by the rule and law and if individuals can do everything they want without being controlled will break the social systems. Personally, I extremely agree with this opinion and this essay will provide suitable reasons with explains and examples.
There are lots of advantages of having laws in society. Of course, we are living in an era in which our society is very developing thanks to people obey the law and follow the rules. This makes citizens turn into good people in society's eyes and helps them avoid things that are prohibited. For example, cocaine causes people's health badly so the government must ban this addictive drug. Furthermore, when society has laws and rules, people will feel safe if they are not do anything that opposites the laws. This reduces the crime rate effectively because they understand what they can do and if they break the rules, they might suffer high penalties.
On the other hand, imaging a nation does not have any laws or rules, that country might fall into chaos by criminals due to there are no rules. In addition, laws and rules are methods that might help you take back your personal profits. For instance, when a husband or a wife can not stay longer in this relationship, they can divorce, which is approved by the government laws.
In conclusion, rules and laws play an important role in society and I believe that if our world does not have laws, we might turn back like the stone age, which is extremely barbaric.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
..., people will feel safe if they are not do anything that opposites the laws. This ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, of course, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74045801527 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40290745165 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1960142461 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226732380568 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830975227822 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760019078874 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134645931288 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729741977576 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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