The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The below pie charts depicts the three different types of nutrients that are consumed in day-to-day food.They are salt, fatty acid, and sugar information is provided in the form of percentages. Moreover, if consumed out of the limit it can be injurious to health. This data is taken from the United States Of America.
Generally, salt and lipids are consumed more in dinner and lunch. Whereas, moderate intake is noted in case of sugar.
Extensive amount of salt intake is eaten up in dinner and lunch that is 43% and 29% respectively. Whereas, moderate consumption of fatty acid is found in dinner and lunch which constitutes 37% and 26% respectively. For lunch and dinner sugar is at minimal level that is 23% and 19% respectively. Means it is lowest of above two nutrients
For, breakfast and snack overall it was 28%, for each means 14%. Cholesterol constitutes for both of them was 21% and 16 % respectively. However, large amount of intake of sugar is found in snacks it is 42%. Whereas, it was same for breakfast that is 16%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ts that are consumed in day-to-day food.They are salt, fatty acid, and sugar informa...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are consumed more in dinner and lunch. Whereas, moderate intake is noted in case of su...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eans it is lowest of above two nutrients For, breakfast and snack overall it was ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83798882682 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74075325322 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8583610337 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1666666667 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0677430073906 0.215688989381 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0208629288145 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371301170221 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394767997615 0.15604864568 25% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483065724097 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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