The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first chart illustrates the percentage of using electrical machines; accordingly, the second one indicates the total time of cleaning each family spent in one country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall, it is clear that the majority of electrical equipment had an upward trend in the given years; vice versa, there was a decline in the time of housekeeping.
According to the first graph, the refrigerator was the lowest item in the first year of the given timescale. However, for the product, growth was fast from 1940 to 1980 with over 50% and 100%, respectively. Next, a similar pattern was seen from 1920 to 1980 with vacuum cleaner when it surpassed washing machine, and remarkable rose with 90%( 1980) and then reached a peak at 100% from 2000 to 2019; whereas, there was an unstable growth of washing machine and the equipment had the final position compared with other devices.
In the second graph, it is apparent that family members were not gradually spending too much time for house chores by the appearance of electrical equipment. the figure was seen that the number of hours of house keeping was dipped notably year by year with 50 hours in 1920, over 30 hours(1940), and 10 hours (2019)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, second, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81067961165 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53247825867 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.017816699 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4285714286 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137514826827 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688070629057 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902173091187 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109742461231 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10114554061 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.