The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Presented the graph illustrating how daily-plastic is reused for a variety of purposes.
All in all, it is clear that the process is happened by nine stages with carrying disposable plastic to trashcan before the producing end products complete and sale on marketing at the final phase.
Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that residents will waste plastic bottles at garbage cans to be transferred by trucks to go recycling center with sorting purpose. In the placement phase, employee will discern what type of plastic bottles can reuse or not. In the next stage, the bottles will be pressed together into a big square before the conglomerations are crushed into tiny pieces. After the pieces will be incorporate t create plastic pellet, the things that inceneration will be practiced material complete will be made into daily-plastic items such as food box, pencils, recycle bags, clothes, etc. . the process will repeat like a cycle.
The vicious cycle will not finish until humans stop to get rid of plastic bottles.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ox, pencils, recycle bags, clothes, etc. . the process will repeat like a cycle. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... pencils, recycle bags, clothes, etc. . the process will repeat like a cycle. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08187134503 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70119933101 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4193677557 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.625 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129684173565 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605744974291 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0213113472292 0.0843802449381 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697650955962 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276817467801 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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