Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are an array of ideas online shopping is supposed to be more bad than good. This writer strongly assert that shopping on the website is more likely to have a vast number of benefits.
On the one hand, there are those who contend that shopping through Google or any website, social technology that is impaccable with reality for their true needs. Morever, people who do not agree with online-shopping are prone to think the products on the website is not the same with the true ones when they buy offline. In addition to, Taobei is a prime example of this situation, the beautiful and perfect in Taobei's picture does not match with what their website shows in real life.
On the another hand, Shopping through a website is suitable for many who do not have time to go to the store and choose the products they are interested in; thus, people especially who work in the office are quite passionate about online-shopping. Furthermore, shopping on these e-commerce pages that help the clients know more about their demands the connection betwwen what primarily because what the customers fathom will be linked to the pages sponsored and it shows them what they need to buy. For instance, if a client wants to buy a dress, chances are a myriad of pages are sponsored will show them many different types of dresses to check.
To sum up, a large number of comments that shopping on the internet is not such a good way. This opposite holds the true that shopping by an e-commerce page or laptop nor smartphone are capable of making people have variety of choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'arrays'?
Suggestion: arrays
There are an array of ideas online shopping is supposed to...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this e-commerce' or ''?
Suggestion: this e-commerce;
...line-shopping. Furthermore, shopping on these e-commerce pages that help the clients know more a...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...d of pages are sponsored will show them many different types of dresses to check. To sum up, ...
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Line 4, column 12, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... types of dresses to check. To sum up, a large number of comments that shopping on the internet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69090909091 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49281678773 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549090909091 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5718792053 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164073545906 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701258790612 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314174120004 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10455973793 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229215554858 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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