Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Online shopping has become more prevalent among consumers, igniting curiosity as to whether it is negative or positive. I personally believe that the benefits of this purchasing habit can eclipse its drawbacks.
Opponents of digital shopping may cite the lack of tangibility required for consumer experience. This is because when purchasing online, people hardly have the opportunities to touch, feel, and check if the products meet their needs or not, potentially leading to dissatisfaction if they do not receive exactly what they expected previously. However, it is important to note that there exist shopping online regulations imposed, allowing customers to return unqualified goods and recoup money. This policy renders the aforementioned worry almost unnecessary.
Admittedly, there is also an argument that online shopping can come at the expense of environmental implications. Innumerable products delivered on a regular basis, coupled with non-degradable packaging, plastic waste, and vehicle emissions from every delivery, they say, pose a grave threat to the environment, leading to air pollution and rubbish-infested environment. Notwithstanding being true to an extent, the concerns regarding packaging and waste can be addressed by the transformation into environmentally friendly packages, which has already been applied in some areas across the world. If vehicles are not used for delivery, it is still utilized for other purposes such as daily commute, making online shopping’s impact on the environment negligible.
Another pronounced merit of digital shopping is that it offers unparalleled convenience, allowing consumers to browse, compare, and purchase goods from the comfort of their homes simply with a click of a button and the internet access. Furthermore, buying things online can help people save a considerable amount of money. To explain, digital shopping platforms or websites often provide buyers with vouchers, special sale occasions or free-shipping codes. Finally, online purchasing can bring about more buying choices, often better than what is available in brick-and-mortar stores as it includes countless brands from local to international, along with their products, catering to people’s demand for shopping.
In conclusion, while online shopping presents some disadvantages, the overall picture suggests that the upside is more significant, given its convenience offered, countless purchasing choices and the fact that it aids in saving money.
- Some people say that young people can learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time Discuss both views and give your own opinions 89
- In many countries many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy Some people believe that the government has the responsibility to deal with it To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Online learning do pros outweigh cons 84
- Some children spend hours every day on smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
- Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., coupled with non-degradable packaging, plastic waste, and vehicle emissions fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87637362637 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22255791935 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651098901099 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0602347598 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145409942157 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046729982477 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294543590098 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777505115664 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022263798531 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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