Nowadays, food manufactures produce high sugar level foods and drinks, which are harmful to people and cause many diseases.
Some people believe these kinds of products should become more expensive so that amount of sugar consumption becomes less. I completely disagree with this statement and explain my reasons in this essay. If the surgery beverages and food become affluent, fewer people could use them. This kind of product has been becoming a recreation for people, which means, for example, drinking soda as high sugar beverage, in watching a soccer match is a popular entertainment. So if the price of soda rises, the fewer people can afford to buy, and finally, the less sugar product would be consumed. But maybe something worse replaces soda, such as cigarettes or alcoholic drinks, which have more adverse impacts on our bodies. So this is not a perfect way.
The health knowledge of people must boost up. A practical way to reduce consumption is to inform people about their well-being, and what these kinds of products could do. If people know the health problems caused by sugary beverages and industrial foods, they will avoid them. In addition, there is an indirect way to minimize negative outcomes of the products. these kinds of products have disastrous effects on our organs bodies, but what makes it worse is our sedentary lifestyle. exercising can reduce the unhealthy repercussions of sugary products, which means there is no problem if you burn the energy of these kinds of products through exercising. For instance, you could drink a Coca-cola if you have time to squeeze in 30 minutes running in your daily schedule.
In conclusion, Since we live in a world in which these kinds of products are ubiquitous, we should find a better way to decline their health problems. as I mentioned exercising and lifting awareness up of people are better ways than increasing price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63852497789 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.423248441 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1764705882 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347499889109 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966452022799 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836188788008 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209692005454 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881383053586 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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