Some people believe advertising is a key point to incentivize them to purchase; however, others find advertising boring and ineffective. This essay will delve into the matter further and reach a logical conclusion at the end.
On the one hand, advertising is crucial for companies. In the technology-focused world, many people including teenagers have inspired celebrities. The popular approach for selling that companies have been taking is to use celebrities to bring their adoring fans into the market. In order to do that, the celebrities are sponsored by a company to promote a product. For instance, the famous well-known footballer Cristiano Ronaldo was used to endorsing the Clear shampoo in commercials. In addition, advertising provides the same level playing field for smaller companies. It means the infant companies to stay in the competitive market need to sell their goods. Never in million years did they be alive if they could not have helped from some creative advertisement methods. Therefore, it shows the advertising still plays a vital role to involve people in buying process.
On the other hand, some people do not take serious kinds of advertisement. In numerous peoples' opinions, the worse thing when watching a TV series is playing a commercial. In this case, series watchers depict their angriness by changing the TV channel. As a matter of fact, the commercial is boring that they take away from it. Furthermore, the advertising fails to grab elderly customers. Numerous elderly consider advertising either tricks to buy or exaggerated words deluding them. Thus, advertisement is not a fascinating way to catch the eye of these parts of society.
In conclusion, numerous successes of advertising illustrate affecting consumers' purchase attitude, although not everyone and not all age groups as above-mentioned. To change these fail to success should come up with new ideas such as using a peer in commercials for old people or rescheduling the time of TV commercial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 662, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...titive market need to sell their goods. Never in million years did they be alive if t...
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Line 2, column 671, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...rket need to sell their goods. Never in million years did they be alive if they could n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28616352201 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1042068606 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625786163522 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4152687828 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.05 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218540066505 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625587655527 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562539313615 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136791745737 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329108350996 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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