Some say that children should be taught at school to recycling and avoid waste. Others say they should learn this at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion
The increase amount of problem concerning waste is becoming unstoppable as regard to some people thinks that proper waste disposal should be taught to children at school while another believers that children should learn at home
There are many of things can do to a waste material on the first hand it is true that proper waste disposal should fisrt learn at home,parents should teach their child how to properly discard a waste.In this simple learning children will become well aware bout the environment and be discipline in nature. Morever, learning how to recycle material not just waste will help the environment to improve also recycling can be fun ang improves a child’s creativily.
On the second hand ,things that can be recycled into a waste product can be a form of income,young people who learn to recycle materials can sell it and may find another good purposes to such things
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, second, so, well, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 151.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94039735099 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57536718114 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 170.100623815 49.4020404114 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.666666667 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6666666667 7.06120827912 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318766787711 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186716592124 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123480723723 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232908458923 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115632338655 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.0 13.0946893788 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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