Everyone has different perspective, which gives rise to different ideas. We live in a society where we can get myriad of ideas about a thing. The above statement states that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. I partly agreed with this statement because, sometimes, ideas arise without a passionate interest as well. We cannot say that ideas arise in people's mind according to their interest, though a person can gives idea that lay behind his interest.
To begin with, ideas come from the inside, when we think about a particular thing such as, art, music, architecture, doctor, etc. For example: when a painter thinks what type of painting should be made, what are the different things could be added, which color to choose to give good impression to a painting, at that time in his mind, thousands of ideas come. When a passionate person thinks regarding his work of interest, he gets lots of other ways or ideas to do that work. Similarly, the architecture thinks in his way. People who have different field of interest of work, cannot think in the way as other person do.
In addition to this, when a child starts go to school, the child does not know what he or she likes to do. A child only gets to know his interest in a particular thing only after engaging or doing the activities. For example: a students who develops his or her interest in sports knows many techniques or ways how to play, or how to defeat the opposite team. Along with, he or she develops with many skills of a particular sports, by way of thinking and creating ideas about that. It is true that the students who are not in sports cannot tell techniques or give ideas to the one who is in sports.
Furthermore, rejecting someone's idea is quite common. Everyone has different ideas, no two person can think the same. Sometimes, a passionate thinker idea might not be good, or disliked by other person. Or it is possible that a person can gives good ideas, which is not his field of interest. It is true that ideas are based on interest, but on the other hand, it is true as well, that ideas come from within a person and that can be related from anything, and not about a particular thing that a person likes or has interest about.
To conclude this, I would like to say that we get ideas from our surroundings as well. We see lot of different people in our daily lives, from them also we get a lot of ideas. But it is not always be necessary that a person only gives best ideas of his or her field of interest, anyone can provides ideas to anybody. Ideas are innovative, we can say that an innovative person can gives innovative and good ideas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 449, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
... to their interest, though a person can gives idea that lay behind his interest. T...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...g or doing the activities. For example: a students who develops his or her interest in spo...
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Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...on. Or it is possible that a person can gives good ideas, which is not his field of i...
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Line 9, column 230, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'gives the best'.
Suggestion: gives the best
... always be necessary that a person only gives best ideas of his or her field of interest, ...
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Line 9, column 291, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...is or her field of interest, anyone can provides ideas to anybody. Ideas are innovative,...
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Line 9, column 381, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...e can say that an innovative person can gives innovative and good ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, similarly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.3162921348 239% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2200.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55486542443 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47335504514 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420289855072 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.585827933 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173663146126 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634318748837 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569114975362 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11599151254 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599079169161 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.