the graphs show changes in the spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data
Given is the pie chart revealing the changes in household spending in the UK from 1971 to 2001
Overall, it is immediately apparent that the proportion of food was the largest of the household spending in 1971, whereas the cost of cars recorded the greatest share of the household spending in 2001
As can be seen from the graph, in 1971, the percentage of spending on food and cars were the biggest figures, at around 44% and 22%, respectively. While the cost of cars saw an upward trend with 43%, the proportion of food witnessed a downward trend at 14% over 30 years
Turning to other remaining groups, the figures spending on books and petrol declined slightly to around 1% and 8%, respectively. Furthermore, with these numbers, the cost of food became the lowest in 2001, while restaurants and computers climbed slowly to approximately 14% and 12%. During the same period, the amount of spending on furniture of the residents in the UK remained steady and just rose 1% until the end of the period
- the graphs show changes in the spending habits of people in the UK between 1971 and 2001 Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data 72
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as the largest of the household spending in 1971, whereas the cost of cars record...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67275902698 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.874676835 43.030603864 281% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.5 112.824112599 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.75 22.9334400587 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168437011194 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823687911817 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753779321639 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123054949785 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683416306548 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.2329268293 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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