in the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Show advantage and disadvantage
It is argued that in today's society, there is a large number of people find it difficult in shopping, working, and communicating through the Internet, instead of direct contact with others. In my opinion, I strongly believe that there are both pros and cons to this issue.
On the other hand, the Internet has become more useful than ever nowadays. Firstly, in terms of the advantages, social networking sites have made it much easier for us to keep in contact with our loved ones, or their consumers, regardless of geographic locations. Students studying far away from home, for example, can keep in touch with their families and friends on a daily basis using the video call features of Skype, Facebook, or various other apps. Secondly, social media is also a powerful tool in shopping. In this digital age, consumers can keep their clients updated regarding newly-released products, and also with only some click in the mouse to order whatever they want. It was a useful approach to save a great deal of time which spent to the shops or distant workplaces.
On the other hand, despite the above benefits, it is clear that when it comes to communication, social media does more harm than good, especially during the covid-19 pandemic. The overuse of social media reduces the quality of interpersonal communication and also causes them to results of misunderstanding because people sometimes cannot express everything they want to say through typing. Online shopping, for instance, compared with the online platform, people can buy suitable clothes by trying on these outfits at shops without afraid of products with low quality, On top of that, communicating with others via online services can also cause a wide range of social issues. Additionally, virtual friendships which are formed online may not totally good enough for youngsters even adult people. The obvious evidence is that the media such as Facebook and Instagram carries a lot of violent things that could lead to serious effects for those youngsters. As a result, there needs to be government or managers to control these kinds of flexible problems.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that these issues have both developments. However, I truly believe that the balance of both sides play a vital role in the society of the recent period
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...argued that in todays society, there is a large number of people find it difficult in shopping, w...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... cons to this issue. On the other hand, the Internet has become more useful than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03664921466 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70728726726 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9284608681 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1875 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175221815106 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447039097486 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591602601025 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932212144142 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547362674694 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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