Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Earth temperature is getting higher year-to-year because of deforestation and fossil fuels consumption, being the most vital environmental issue this day. To solve this, authorities can control the regulation, while people should limit to use the obsolete technology using this kind of substance.
On one hand, the cause of global warming is the deforested land due to the urban development which is backgrounded by overpopulation, and fossil fuels consumption, especially for vehicles utilize. If a plenty of trees in the forest is cut, it will distract the carbon cycle, being no organisms in land to absorb carbon dioxide released to atmosphere from transports, impacting the ozone depletion. As per WWF data in 2018 about Sumatra’s tropical rain forest, the immense expansion of Palembang city, in the south region, in addition to carbon dioxide of car ownerships there resulted 5% of CO2 emission total entire the world. As the long-term effect, Indonesia is a country suffering the most of hot temperature in regard to lack of CO2 absorption, implicated as one of the countries which affect the rising the Earth’s warm temperature, now.
How to solve this? Firstly, government should regulate the regime about the urbanization, imposing to expand the green space in towns, establishing new residence without cutting a plenty of trees. Secondly, publics have not to utilize fossil energy, say, contributing to use non-motors vehicle in the town, such as bicycle, and taking public-transport to travel outside the region. Therefore, this way may reduce the rising of earth’s warm, revealing an immense effect, albeit this only a tiny action.
To sum up, the roots of global warming are that deforesting jungles and fossil fuels needs. Authorities must develop the urban area eco-friendly, and communities must rarely use the fossil energy. If we do not increase high level of self-awareness of this world’s problem, it will be the beginning of human extinction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...echnology using this kind of substance. On one hand, the cause of global warming...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, kind of, such as, in regard to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34294871795 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06321566126 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0890511684 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.230769231 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140397047974 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447677148967 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472273892099 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752726344367 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024045707967 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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