the best to relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone
Everyone has their own preferred lifestyle, and it is difficult to accommodate all of them. Many people prefer to relax alone without attendance of other, while other like to stay with a group. I believe that spending time alone helps people to relax and reduce their stress. There are three reasons why I think this way, which will explore in following essay.
To begin with, staying alone provides people with an efficient circumstance to focus on their personal life, and find their way of serenity. Most people are able to concentrate better in silent places without any noises or distractions, which means that in such situations people will stay calm, and as a result, they have the opportunity to release their stress. Moreover, psycalogically speaking, the production of stress hormones in silent places is less than crowded locations. My experience is a compelling example of that. Over three years ago, I decided to spend me leisure time in Kish island in IRAN alone after my final exam to alleviate my stress. However, my cousin family that had two teenage boys persisted to come with me. I needed to stay alone and concentrated on my personal goals to relax and find my serenity; however, the noises of children have distracted my attentions more and more. If I had taken that trip alone, I would have been able to relieve my stress and focus on my life in best manner.
Second, people who spend their time with a group of friends always face some serious problems about managing and coordinating of group activity, which will lead to more anxiety and lack of serenity. If a group of people decide to spend their time together, they should adjust their personal programs to the group target. Indeed, since most people have different lifestyle, this time management or activity arrangement will create some major dilemma for others. Undoubtedly, facing such problems during our vacations will increase the stress hormones. Accordingly, with this directionless feeling during taking a trip, people are likely to suffer some mental problems. For example, during the last trip with my cousin family, I felt more stress because they usually arrived late for airplane or forgot to bring all their travel’s document. I believe that spending time alone is the best way to relax and release our leisure travel because controlling an individual is easier than doing with a group of people.
In conclusion, considering all aforementioned reasons, I believe that it is better to relax alone than with others. That is because noise and distraction will get people into trouble during concentration. Furthermore, controlling a group of people will increase our anxiety during a trip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1004, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
... relieve my stress and focus on my life in best manner. Second, people who spend their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05630630631 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68309233114 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3462947338 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.045454545 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274570066186 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087286046763 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125617022048 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180208420504 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773573377848 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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