It is generally considered that overpopulation of cities areas has led to many obstacles. This essay will articulate some of considerable serous issue and propose some possible solutions to alleviate them.
To commence with, many youth can not easily get the job. To elaborate it, when the urban areas has many people and youth living in there. So, it is very hard to find a job because most of all youth works in the many types of companies. In today's era, each person need to fulfill their needs. In addition, they face the many problems like money, living and food. To epitome, a survey was conducted by the Canadian youth university in 2018 found that 85% students whose post graduate from the well known university they unable find a good post because most of international students get this job. To mitigate it, government and masses should that in each nation established the more firms for the students for their jobs.
The another problem caused by this issue that increase the crime ratio. To elaborate it, when the overcrowded in the big cities then no one any afraid from the any cops or individuals. They will be start the crime in any area. Society will never safe from this type of people. For instance, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES "newspaper revealed that 45% masses attempt a crime in the crowd area because no one can recognize them in these areas. To solve it, administration should that use the police force in crowded area.
To conclude, although humans can face the fund and crime in the crowded areas yet I believe that these issues can be resolved with the help of regime and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56139389568 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1534694436 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154531417403 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479181974729 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417998507046 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898051096817 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029741386348 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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