Nowadays individuals face the numerous obstacles in their daily routine who live in the big urban cities. This essay will examine some of these problems in detail and then purpose some solution to alleviate them.
To commence with, they are facing the pollution problems in their daily life. To explicate it, when they go to outside for their job or market they are facing hassels like air and noise pollution. In addition, they also surrounding in many diseases. With the noise pollution they hear loudly. For instance, a survey was conducted by the WHO (WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION) found in 2016 that 50% patient was admitted of breathe and ear problems. To solve it, the regime should closed the companies who make loud horn and smoky vehicles.
Moving towards the another issue, biggest problem is traffic. To explain it, all in the streets and roads with full of cars, bikes, buses and trucks. Walking society face the traffic on the roads and aisle. In addition, they get late from their duties. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that 20% youngster had to give up his jobs because they were daily late in office because reason was traffic. To tackle it, authority should that apply traffic lights at every turn on the road.
To conclude, although humans have to facing some issues to live in the cities yet these are all hurdles can tackled with the help of executive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91358024691 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35174293805 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.977560143 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231869982055 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751410899237 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844847624691 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14924427243 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488857704217 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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