It is considered that numerous websites giving news on the internet. while few masses assume that these are all websites will fully changed into new newspapers and magazines in both. I firmly accord with this given statement and will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, on the internet mature individuals face many hassels because of their less knowledge. To explain it, they do not know more about phones, laptops, and computers. They can not find any news quickly from the internet because they do not use these are all gadgets. Thus, they are unable to reach on the latest news.
Shifting towards view of agreement, youngster can get easily and fast gain the knowledge of all over the globe. To elaborate it, in modern era kinders have a craving for the known about the all knowledge. so, when they are studying then they can searching on the internet about any news. To epitome, a survey was conducted by the canadian university found in 2018 that 90% children know about all the authority news from the internet in just of their less age. Hence, they can easily all gain knowledge about their rights.
Furthermore, people can save their money. In other words, they can not need to buy the magazine, also they can find more knowledge from internet then newspaper. So they are save their money. For instance, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that masses has 80% money save from the magazines in one year. As a result, with this they can invest their money in another
field.
To conclude, although it is difficult for the elders, yet this is best way to gain more knowledge and save their funds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, thus, while, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85964912281 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40189726998 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0223267529 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9444444444 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12328759117 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474212303293 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588749726883 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820780148298 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814989633842 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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