It is often argues that few masses ponder life is good to live in urban areas but others assume that life is better in the rural areas. This essay will intend to analyse both the views along with my perspective.
On the one hand, to live in city it is better for all the individuals for their lifestyles. To explicate it, society are able to know about all the living styles in the big cities. They are know about the different types of clothes, new meals, new traditions, studies and more. They can increase their knowledge level. For instance, a survey was conducted by the Canadian university found in the 2016 that half of the nation people are educated and good looking. Hence, they can teach to their kids and give a success life.
On the other hand, living in the rural areas good for their health. To explain it, there is no pollution like noise and air in the farming areas. mature and youngest are safe living in this field. They secure their life from the fatal diseases. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed that 90% multitude who lives in the agriculture zone they can live a very long time. As a result, they can never surrounded by the harm disorder.
To conclude, although it is good for the remember all things in the city life yet i believe that in village life best for the health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mature
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58606557377 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32308371613 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569672131148 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3865717262 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18510677514 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576710777009 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570330602049 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123572922343 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497985051684 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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