The graph shows the proportions of unemployment and the number of citizens leaving Ireland between 1988 and 2008
The graph illustrates the differences and changes in the proportions of unemployment and the number of citizens leaving Ireland, over a two-decade period between 1988 and 2008. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were upward trends in both surveyed categories. Noticeably, the figures in the beginning of the period dominated the researched market.
In particular, when it comes to unemployment rate, the percentage of people stood at about 17% in 1988, which accounted for the highest score. At this point, the given graph witnessed a significant decrease to approximately 8% in 1998, which was half in comparison with that in 1988. Afterwards, the figure declined slightly to below 6% and remained stable at this percentage in many years, which constantly occupied the smallest proportion. After that, the percentage finished at exactly 6% in 2008.
In terms of residents relocating from Ireland, a considerable fall from around 60000 people in 1988 to 30000 people in the following decade was experienced in the number. It can be seen that there was a sustainable growth of 20000 people to reach at 50000 people in the figure at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09844559585 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91336419706 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585492227979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3525083032 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262317702852 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107548141467 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17534207365 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184057467562 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146173205621 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.