the graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph depicts the percentage of residents who are older than 65 years, over 100 years in three separated countries including the United States, Sweden and Japan, from 1940 and also set plan for 2040.
Overall, it is evident that the proportion of the population who aged 65 in the USA and Sweden increases with slight drops in the period whereas that in Japan starts to decrease from 1940 to 1980 before a sharp rise.
Firstly, in 1940, the highest percentage of older people living in the USA at nearly 10%, Sweden ranked second with 7%, it was then followed by Japan with only 5%. There was a increasing trend in the USA to 15% in 1980 and then it received a slightly decrease. However, it is projected that the figure will continuously rise until 2040. A similar trend can also be witnessed in Sweden, the number of demographics climbs from 1940 to 2040 ( at 25%) with some small fluctuation.
Turning to Japan, there was a slight decline in the proportion of old people from 1940 to 1990 before it starts to surge to the end of the period. The figure will soar dramatically from 2030 and reached the peak of over 25% which is the highest rate between three nations in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, second, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 980.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55813953488 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38176777611 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548837209302 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8854988243 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159255600284 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684869639955 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049994719297 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109415054371 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038394032676 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.