the maps show changes between 1960 and now in the station street
The given maps illustrate the development that occurred in the Street Station, over a six-decade period from 1960 to now. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the station has been completely changed, except for Dry cleaner’s in the southeast corner that has remained stable over the period.
In particular, the first noticeable change that could be seen is the fact that in the Northern of the station, a row of stores in the year 1960 have transformed into three buildings, particularly Parking, Super Market and a coffee shop.
On the opposite side of Station Street, the grocery, situated in the southwest of the map, has been demolished to make way for the construction of Hotel. Besides, public telephones and railway station in 1960 have been replaced with new railway station. Noticeably, itcan be seen that the only place that has been untouched is Dry cleaner’s located in the southeast corner with no change done to it.
- Today food travels from thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer Some people say that it would be better for the economy environment if people ate food produced from local farmers Why is this the case Is it a positive development 84
- The pie charts below show the proportions of energy produced from 5 sources in a country in 1995 and 2003
- Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities To what extent do you agree or disagree 75
- A table shows the percentage of employment in Australia for different age groups A bar graph shows the percentage of part time employment in Australia by gender 57
- In education and employment some people work harder than others Why do some people work harder Is it always a good thing to work hard 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at has remained stable over the period. In particular, the first noticeable chan...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'cleaners'.
Suggestion: cleaners
...ly place that has been untouched is Dry cleaner’s located in the southeast corner with no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, so, except for, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95597484277 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68964821261 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9485178615 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286779551331 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138821418532 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923761395729 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176411639062 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415842431007 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.