A lot of people have become dependent on technology as it plays a big role in our daily lives. Do you agree that living in computer age has more advantages than disadvantages?
Ever since the Internet was invented, the rapid changes occurred on how humans behave towards it. Living in a high-tech era, the vast majority of people are craving for technology to fulfill their needs in everyday life, such as working, studying and communicating. On the other hand, this massive alteration is not only giving benefits, but also it can damage people in a detrimental way.
Some people might say there are numerous negative impacts of living in this modern era, however, I genuinely agree that the advantages of it outweigh the drawbacks both efficiently and effectively.
By having a shortcut to everything, it is generally believed that living in this modern era along with sophisticated technologies makes things easier for us. By only having a single device with an internet connection with it, people are simply able to reach everything their needs, such as reaching out friends, absorbing valuable information, and doing some profitable business. Because of this improvement, people are now living way better than they were in the past. In job fields or schools, everything is successfully operated by using the internet, for instance arranging meetings, distance-learning, and some of the basic activities of working and studying.
Nevertheless, Socializing which is one of the most important aspects of life is the biggest issue in this modern age. The more people utilize technologies, the less they physically interact one another. With a plethora of online applications and numerous games available on computers or smartphones, people tend to be less socializing in real life. To be more specific, this area is completely harmful when it comes down to a child's development. Likewise, there are lots of parents failing to restrain their children away from their devices; therefore, making teenagers who are addicted to these virtual lives has less socialization. In some extreme situation, this can lead youngers to be an anti-social person.
In conclusion, giving people mobility and ease to cope with various paramount aspects in life, I would have to say these beneficial things which we earn outsmart the disadvantages of living in this computer era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a detrimental way" with adverb for "detrimental"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...benefits, but also it can damage people in a detrimental way. Some people might say there are nume...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...anging meetings, distance-learning, and some of the basic activities of working and studyin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30547550432 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01649687188 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613832853026 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2620623955 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.733333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206499089806 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641869194901 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484932126735 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116219117146 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223574222654 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.