Sample topic: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While the majority of leaders fixate on the notion that economic growth plays a pivotal role in the country, plenty of citizens opine that other types of development should be just as prioritized. Although both perspectives are justified to some extent, I gravitate towards the latter.
On the one hand, economic furtherance is undeniably the backbone of one nation, the tower of strength and also the beacon of its status on the world stage. Alongside this progress comes that the quality of accommodations and available amenities is to be upgraded. These traits, therefore, ensure a better life for civilians. Moreover, it is also an indicator of how redoubtable a country is. The USA might be the best case in point; such an indomitable pillar buttressing the global economy can make the whole world pay heed to whatever it announces and refrain any adversary countries from challenging its sovereignty. For these reasons, the advance in the economy is essential for any nation.
On the other hand, both governments and competent authorities need to take other kinds of progress into consideration. Sustainability development may be the most exemplary. The degradation of nature and the ubiquity of environmental pollutions boil down to the snowballing economy and clusters of industrial sweatshops. It is time they regulated strict ordinances to prohibit effluent and exhaust fumes disposed in the wilderness. The rocketing development speed of a country’s industrialization is not on par with that of nature deterioration anymore, which indicates that the health of ordinary people and natural habitats is in jeopardy. Aside from this, gender equality is another heated issue. Some economic leviathan like China still encounters difficulties with a remarkable asymmetry in male and female population as the rate of single men gallops throughout the years. Simultaneously, pay disparity prevailing in the workplace has made women unable to ask for a rise. This, later, can lead to protests since the women empowerment movement will incentivize females to fight for their rights. Before unrest breaks out, the government should take action to redress that imbalance.
In conclusion, though the economy is of paramount importance, it is still not omnipotent enough to troubleshoot problems associated; therefore, governments should divide their attention equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48907103825 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15664122566 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620218579235 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3132904362 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.736842105 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16970644188 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440422573597 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339857863617 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856435569252 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306036537857 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.