The economy is often considered the main driver of a country's growth. Therefore, it is understandable that many governments prioritize economic progress above all else. However, others argue that advancements in education, technology, and other sectors are equally crucial for national development. In my opinion, while economic progress is essential, it should not overshadow the importance of progress in other areas, as these contribute significantly to a nation's overall well-being.
Governments are tasked with maintaining and enhancing the economy because it influences every aspect of life. A robust economy ensures the effective circulation of money, which is vital for national growth. Without sound economic management, a country can stagnate or even regress. Strong macroeconomic and microeconomic performance reduces poverty, increases employment, and controls inflation, thereby improving the quality of life for all citizens. Additionally, a prosperous economy provides the financial resources needed to advance other sectors such as education, technology, and defense, and positions the country as a central hub for global trade.
Beyond economic progress, it is imperative for a country to invest in education and technology. Educating the younger generation nurtures talent and builds a foundation for a high-quality workforce. A literate and educated population contributes to a healthier, safer society with lower crime rates and a better overall environment. Education also lays the groundwork for technological innovation. For instance, Silicon Valley exemplifies how an ecosystem that nurtures talent can drive technological breakthroughs and foster numerous successful startups. As we advance into the era of robotics and artificial intelligence, such innovations can have transformative effects on the global economy, akin to the revolutionary impact of the smartphone on communication.
In conclusion, while economic improvement should be a primary goal due to its foundational role in enhancing all aspects of life, we must also recognize the critical importance of progress in education and technology. These areas not only rival economic development in importance but can also feed back into and bolster the economy, creating a stronger, more resilient nation. By balancing efforts across these sectors, a country can ensure comprehensive and sustainable growth.
- Task 1 The bar chart shows the percentage of small medium large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016
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- In the modern world many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams What are the main causes of this problem What are the effects of lack of such skills 84
- Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little What extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities To what extent do you agree Use specific details and examples to explain your view 11
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98837209302 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33882952323 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601744186047 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3367814862 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213284294921 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658435240191 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611928168901 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137998831384 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784085375852 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.35 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98837209302 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33882952323 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601744186047 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3367814862 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.444444444 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213284294921 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658435240191 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611928168901 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137998831384 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784085375852 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.35 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.46 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.