Some people believe that smartphones are destroying social interaction today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
over the last decades, the way that media has changed drastically due to the major advances in technology. A growing number of people think that advanced mobile phones are spoiling the communication with society nowadays. I agree that smartphones these days isolate the people from the community.
The primary advantage of using the smartphones, that people can work through it from any where they like. For instance, people need not have to commute to work. Millions of people world wide have to deal with rush hour traffic to make their way to the office. Obviously this is could be minimize using online work facility, even many job related conference meetings could be held.
Another advantage of using the smartphone, is by using social media application, such as Whatsapp, Facebook, and Instagram. With the use of this applications people can communicate in the form of audio, video and pictures with each others throughout the world. this made the life more convinient over the years
I admit that apart from the advantages by using smartphones, there are some drawbacks related to the use of it. As nowadays people are more familiar with the smartphones, they are prone to addiction towards it. Hence, they are getting isolated from the society. As a result, people destroy there social life.
In summary, smartphone may have certain merits, it can also leave an negative impact on the person social life, which is too important. I am convienced that usage of smartphones should be restricted, focused on social gathering which will be improves the physical as well as mental ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, well, apart from, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15589353612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66974310149 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6104853472 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141908739289 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563005275556 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603378428356 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791304837269 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280261816908 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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