Nowadays, many people want to shop online more. People are interested in shopping online because of its advantages. However, it still exists some disadvantages. So, there are both advantages and disadvantages when shopping online.
First of all, together with technology development, especially, it is the internet. People can use it for many aspects of their life. Typically, we use the internet for shopping. We need to use smartphones or computers, we can. The first advantage is people can buy anything they want, but they do not need to go out. This helps save much time for people who are busy all day such as housewives, office workers, companies, and so on. It is easy to purchase any product for home, and it just needs to pay the fee of product which bought. The second benefit of shopping online, it is easy to choose many goods. Moreover, it just needs one click or enters the products' keyword, it is possible to buy that thing immediately. With all of the various products and there is information about the price of products, buyers can select and compare all of the products to others. People can consider whether or not they should be bought, and buy the best product. The last advantage is people can buy many things at the same time by shopping online. Difference from shopping offline, especially, shopping at the market, in case of shopping alone and it is too cumbrous to bring too many products to the home. Shopping online is the best choice, it is possible to buy many things and do not need to bring too many things because there are services that transport at home.
Second, besides advantages, there are some disadvantages when shopping online. That is, sometimes, products that we are received are not unlike products that we chose. The picture of products looks eye-catching, but "the real" is completely different. Even, its quality is poor. This makes us not satisfied. In addition, the shipping fee is flexible. It is sometimes cheap or expensive compared with what we saw while we were buying. We are unforeseen this thing. There is one more problem, transporting the product we bought is slow, compared with expectation date. For example, we order one thing today and with shop's notice that we will receive it tomorrow. However, because of some problems in transporting process, we must wait for three days, one week or even one month somehow. This makes us not interested.
To sum up, as mentioned above, shopping online is helpful for us. However, it stills remain too many drawbacks. Therefore, we need to consider thoroughly before buying. Such as we should select prestige shops, prices, and it is necessary to ask the shop about information about the product in order to buy the best product and avoid risks in shopping online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 472.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89618644068 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67763671945 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470338983051 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 16.0721442886 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1717011207 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9705882353 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26470588235 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239754620592 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646438447579 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724264683235 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173782240603 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093303505748 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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