Traditionally, household chores such as cooking, cleaning, and taking care of children are women's duties. However, I think this idea is not suitable for nowadays society. I agree that both men and women these days should share household chores.
These days, some women still have to do all the housework, even though our society has developed. Not because women do not want to share housework with men but because society labels women to be. We are living in a modern, equal, and civilized society. I think both men and women should be responsible for housework in a family. I think it is not mean I have a high opinion of feminism. It is equal between men and women. When getting married, both men and women have to care about housework. That thing brings justice and happiness to the family. Moreover, it helps restrict controversy is not worth it.
Finally, men should share household chores with, because that helps reduce somewhat burdened for women. Women suffered strenuous in the feudal system period. Now, if housework is only a women's duty according to that old beliefs, it's not fair at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, still, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84126984127 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49855365345 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0360537068 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.0 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302605372757 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107011435203 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102321138682 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223135881415 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527822615274 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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