The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The three pie charts illustrate data about daily meals from breakfast to dinner with snacks average amount of nutrients which not fruitfull for if it exceed the limit.
Overall, dinner has significant amount of each cumponent of chemical instead of added suger, while breakfast contain least proportion of nutrients. Snacks have small proportion Sodium and Saturated fat inside however suger with large proportion.
The graphs show that Sodium is primary incridients in dinner with 43% and lunch has 29% of sodium. However Breakfast and snacks have equal quantity of sodium 14%. Dinner has one third proportion of Saturated fat. Lunch has 26% fat although it decrese in comparison of sodium.Breakfast and snacks have 16% and 21% of Saturated fat propotion respectively. Sancks have most amount of added Suger 42% which more than others. Dinner contain 23% added suger inside. While, other two Breakfast and Lunch have less than 20% added suger.
To sum up this, Breckfast is more healthy than other, almsot cotain equal amount
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exceeds'?
Suggestion: exceeds
...nutrients which not fruitfull for if it exceed the limit. Overall, dinner has signifi...
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Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'contain the least'.
Suggestion: contain the least
...instead of added suger, while breakfast contain least proportion of nutrients. Snacks have sm...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...r with 43% and lunch has 29% of sodium. However Breakfast and snacks have equal quantit...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Breakfast
...ough it decrese in comparison of sodium.Breakfast and snacks have 16% and 21% of Saturate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54771905044 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4709874657 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6363636364 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0521346465448 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202796506124 0.103423049105 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405301200336 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421136744925 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591325227307 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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