Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
A growing number of people read news online. Nevertheless, it is believed that newspaper will retain/ always be the primary source of news. This essay partially agrees with the idea.
To begin with, newspapers will always be the first choice of news simply because of the credibility of news. To explain/ In explanation/ In other words/ This is because, almost all newspapers , in general, verify the sources of news in multiple steps/ for multiple times before putting it on papers where usually online news portals are less concerned regarding the authenticity of news. For example, a recent study conducted /carried out/led by BBC found that 95% of the news provided by newspapers is true where about 35% of online news is either (fake) fabricated or misleading. In addition/ moreover/Besides, newspapers are also a part and parcel/an integral part of our traditional life.Therefore/hence/thus/so, people will choose newspaper as their primary choice of news.
However/ on the contrary, It is highly likely/seems that newspapers might be/ will be replaced by online portals because of its ease of access. This is because we can certainly/admittedly receive news on the go or virtually anywhere with a single click on our phones or computers. To illustrate, a research reveals that a sizeable number of newspapers are on the verge of extinction due to the fact that users cannot access to newspaper as conveniently as they do with online news portals. So, newspaper may lose its supremacy to online news portals in near future.
In conclusion, this essay based on the reflection seen above believe that newspapers and online news portals will be growing side by side because of their own unique features.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27616294176 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541516245487 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1520064785 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302474385631 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133854128243 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530612706512 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204632236965 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795714737093 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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