Some people believe that fast food industry is destroying the health, family easting timings and environment.
Do you agree/disagree. Give your opinion and examples.
fast food, like other cuisines, it has grown in popularity in recent years. While some people feel that this a beneficial thing, other dietitians believe that it has a negative affect on people. I feel that encouraging fast food will have disastrous implications. I totally agree with this statement.
On the hand, people enjoy eating quick food. As a result, fast food restaurants are immensely popular with teens, office employees, and others. The number of fast food restaurants is increasing on a daily basis, which is rather about people's hectic schedules force them to rely primarily on fast food than making conventional meals at home. In a busy metropolis, no one wants to spend time making dinner for their family; instead, they prefer to order fast food from the comfort of their own house. As a result, there are fast food restaurants on every corner of the street, we now live in a world where being overweight is a widespread issue. For example, every youngster over the age of 15 in our nation has a weight problem, and fast food is the sole cause of this. Not only that, but the environment is increasingly being harmed by a large amount of garbage from fast food since it includes many harmful pollutants, and fast food packaging is substantially harmed.
On the other hand, Not only can eating fast food on a daily basis affect one's health, but most fast food has a slew of dangerous chemical additions such as preservatives, flavoring agents, and pesticides. many of these, it turns out, are not only harmful for you, but also awful for the environment. if the possible health problems aren't enough to put you off, the environmental consequences could. The environment is harmed not just by the chemicals used in fast food, but also by the production process. For instance, fast food restaurants sell a lot of meat. The greatest, if not all, of this meat is produced on factory farms, which give more to global warming. Second, many of their products are transported long distances, before arriving at your booth, increasing their influence on pollution levels even more.
To summarize, I believe that our first focus should be our health and our surroundings. As a result, we should limit our consumption of fast food to protect our health and the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87403598972 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74945557355 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555269922879 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1562820409 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.45 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255298032704 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794284591034 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029850816792 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148019921663 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343380374591 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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