In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking is a dangerous habit that can lead to serious health consequences and death. because the act of releasing smoke is considered unconscious, it is banned in many nations throughout the world. this statement totally agrees with the above statement because smoking causes several health issues and pollutes the air.
To begin with, smoking in public is banned in the some countries. people who breathe secondhand smoke, in particular, are more dangerous than smokers. Passive smoking may cause a variety of dangerous diseases, including lung cancer, heart disease and stroke, nervous system degeneration, and others, which nonsmoker cannot prevent while someone is there. According to health facility information, such as, if a pregnant woman habitually breaths smoke, it can injure the fetus and can even induce miscarriage, putting the pregnant woman's life in danger.
Furthermore, this ban helps smokers in getting rid of this unhealthy habit. When they communicate with others, they are often avoided or ignored. As a result, smokers decide to stop than pay a fee for a cause that isn't worth paying. Besides, the ban allows them to live in greater peace with the people around them, which will inspire smokers to quit. this has shown to be especially successful in nations where nationwide bans have been implemented, forcing people to leave controlled areas.
To summarize, smoking bans in public areas should be promoted in many nations because they can help us end various smoking diseases, which will improve the health of millions of people, which is unquestionably a great development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, in particular, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35039370079 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72204451085 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.16280677 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184263706039 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662324435483 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526256249613 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114626198133 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030993106504 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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