In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
Smoking has been banned in public places like parks, restaurants, colleges, hospitals and public transports in many nations. This essay agrees with the statement because this will prevent people from the harmful effects of passive smoking and also encourages smokers to quit.
The primary reason for making smoking illegal in public makes sense is preventing people from having to breathe from second hand smoking. Passive smoking will develop many smoking- related diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and stroke. British Medical Association recently conducted a survey and found that people who often exposed to tobacco smoke are 4 times more likely to develop heart –related diseases, than those who do not having to breathe from second hand smoking.
The second main reason for the ban is to help people who are regular smokers of cigarettes to quit their habit. When smokers and non-smokers socialize together, smokers often ostracized from the group because always they have to leave everyone else from the group to light up and this should encourage smokers to avoid smoking. Those who quit the habit of smoking would feel more a part of the social gathering and this will encourage them to quit the habit. This has been proven in Ireland, the first country in the world to have nationwide ban, where people have to leave the bar and restaurant to smoke out.
In conclusion, making smoking against the law will prevent innocent people from dying because of passive smoking and reduce the number of smokers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 543, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'banned'.
Suggestion: banned
...country in the world to have nationwide ban, where people have to leave the bar and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.132 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30931678208 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1641834609 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1935288451 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902460666974 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595277382347 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131945247812 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587705977453 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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