It is argued that during the time of natural disasters, the developed countries should help the poorer nations with humanitarian relief. This essay agree with this statement because, this can create a good relation between two countries and also the affected country cannot overcome the situation by themselves.
To begin with, supporting poorer nations at the time of calamities will make a better connection among countries. This will enhance both the countries in terms of natural resources and also business. For examply, recent studies shows that, 45% of the agricultural land in Africa is not being used till now because of the lack of machineries and expertise. Developed countries can provide skilled people and also can apply new technology.
Moreover, an undeveloped country alone cannot come out from unforeseen challenges. People need of essential commodities, they starve for even food. When a country face any unforeseen challenges, the people may loose everything even their loved ones. Such situation, the country will expect some help and support from rich countries. For instance, recently, India suffered from heavy rain and flood, during their pain time all other wealthy nations provided them humanitarian relief including cloths, food, water etc.
In conclusion, country affected by natural calamities need support to overcome the situation, The affected countries will have an intimacy towards the rich country which served them with their needs and it can even create a good development in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...y unforeseen challenges, the people may loose everything even their loved ones. Such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48101265823 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68124121642 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0783896046 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303504565699 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111169679022 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137989033977 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188455716235 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927261382762 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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