The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century
The bar chart illustrates how agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial sectors contribution to the UK economy changed over the twentieth century.
Overall, business and financial services saw a remarkable rise in the contribution to the UK economy, manufacturing witnessed a steady decrease and agriculture undergone a dramatic decline by the end of the century.
Manufacturing accounted for 45% of the total contribution in the UK economy in 1900 and then decreased steadily and reached around 20% in 2000. By contrast, Business and financial rose remarkably during the century. To be exact, it begin at around 5% in 1900, then increased rapidly and reached around 35% in 2000.
Agriculture on the other hand, made the most contributions in the beginning to the economy, at around 50% in 1900 and 1950. Then, it shrunk steeply to almost 10% in 1975 and then steadily decreased and its contribution was only around 2% by the end of the century.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sectors'' or 'sector's'?
Suggestion: sectors'; sector's
...anufacturing and business and financial sectors contribution to the UK economy changed ...
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Line 9, column 233, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begins'?
Suggestion: begins
...bly during the century. To be exact, it begin at around 5% in 1900, then increased ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13037834348 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525641025641 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4696770577 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268469888344 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136300123799 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132097872171 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199631331951 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136180063108 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.