In many countries, smoking now is illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
In many areas in this time, it is illegal to smoke at places like parks, schools, hospitals, etc and the supporters claim that is such a justified ban. This essay totally agrees with this iniative because the law helps reduce the number of passive smokers involve in lung cancer or having problems with the breathe and it also is an encouragement to smokers to quit.
The primary reason for the ban's acception is its humality, especially for the non-smokers. There is a truth that one do not use cigarettes but breath their smoke is still involved in health problems. That is called passive smoking and it is even more harmful than active thing. For example, in Vietnam, there is a high rate of people have hung cancer due to their lives surrounded with smokers though they never touch one cigarrette.
Another explaination for the ban's justice is encouraging individuals who smoking to quit. Obviously, the public places are included workplaces, hospitals, parks and if a addicted cigarette wants to light on, he or she has to make an excuse or leave these place to a specific one. Therefore, the time smoking will decrease and the smokers soon give up this harmful habit. For example, in Vietnam, if a smoker see children around they try not to light on and if this ban lays down, it can be a strong encouragement to smokers to quit soon.
To conclude, it is reasonable that many individuals support to ban smoking in public places because of its effect to health community and the way to quit smoking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... in lung cancer or having problems with the breathe and it also is an encouragement to smok...
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Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bans'' or 'ban's'?
Suggestion: bans'; ban's
...s to quit. The primary reason for the bans acception is its humality, especially f...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'bans'' or 'ban's'?
Suggestion: bans'; ban's
...arrette. Another explaination for the bans justice is encouraging individuals who ...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ded workplaces, hospitals, parks and if a addicted cigarette wants to light on, h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73384030418 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61324356152 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58174904943 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4754552051 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.181818182 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21195059104 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815579924728 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810814022783 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138234910266 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053307355008 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.